Friday, November 1, 2013

Ted Sorensen's 6 Basic Rules for Speechwriting

Theodore Chaikin "Ted" Sorensen - the man who advised several Presidents over a period of 50 years, including John F. Kennedy, and was his counsel & speechwriter - compiled a list of six basic rules for speechwriting:

1.) Less Is Almost Always Better Than More
  • Make it as simple and direct as the Ten Commandments; as simple of J.P. Morgan's alleged response to the youngster who asked him the secret to the stock market: "It fluctuates." 
  • Two examples: 
    • Winston Churchill's opening line in his radio address after the fall of France in June 1940: "The news from France is very bad." Not one unclear or unnecessary word. 
    • A sign for a fish store window: "Fresh Fish for Sale Here Today." The only necessary word on that sign is "fish."
2.) Choose Each Word As A Precision Tool
  • Care and prudence in selecting the right word and sequence of words.
  • Stay out of the terminology trap.
  • Use metaphors.
3.) Organize The Text To Simplify, Clarify, Emphasize
  • A speech should flow from an outline in logical order.
  • Number points, when appropriate; each numbered paragraph can start with the same few words.
  • There should be a tightly organized, coherent, and consistent theme.
4.) Use Variety And Literary Devices To Reinforce Memorability, Not Confuse Or Distract
  • Use of Quotations 
    • "Some men see things as they are and say, 'Why?' I dream of things that never were and say, 'Why not?'"
  • Rhyming words are more easily remembered and more clearly communicated.
    • "Let every nation know...that we shall oppose any foe."
  • Alliteration and repetition can help make a speech memorable.
    • "Let us never negotiate out of fear, but let us never fear to negotiate."
    • "Bring the absolute power to destroy other nations under the absolute control of all nations."
5.) Employ Elevated But Not Grandiose Language
  • JFK and Sorensen tried to elevate and yet simplify his speeches; not to patronize his audiences, but to keep his sentences short, his words understandable, and his organizational structure and ideas clear.
  • Kennedy used straightforward declarations, not "maybe" or "perhaps."
  • A policy speech is not a statute, which needs to specify every detail in legally precise and comprehensive terms - nor should it be, if it is to be both enjoyed and understood by all its listeners.
6.) Substantive Ideas Are The Most Important Part Of Any Speech
  • A great speech is great because of the strong ideas conveyed, the principles, the values, the decisions.
  • If the ideas are great, the speech will be great, even if the words are pedestrian; but if the words are soaring, beautiful, eloquent, it is still not a great speech if the ideas are flaw, empty, or mean-spirited.


-Excerpt from "Counselor: A Life at the Edge of History" by Ted Sorensen (2008)

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